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.The table chart shows the sales at a small restaurant in Downtown business district

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The tabular chart illustrates the information the sales at a small restaurant in a Downtown business district. Overall, it can be seen that the sales week in the restaurant. The sale of dinner more on Friday whenever lunch earns more on Wednesday. Spending money on launch to $2400 on Monday which is increased by Tuesday accounted as $2450 on the same day of the week, expending on dinner $3623 and $3850 respectively, of on the third day of week people spend money for lunch is $ 2559, in the following day lunch earn the same amount of money as in the earlier day. On Friday, people are spending on lunch approximately $ 2500 and for dinner, they Expend double the amount of money. on the sixth day of the week lunch and dinner near about $1950 and 2900 dollar respectively whereas lunch earn the same amount of money and people spend on dinner double of lunch on weekends.
The tabular chart illustrates the information the sales at a
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restaurant in a Downtown business district.
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that the sales
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in the restaurant. The sale of
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dinner
more on Friday whenever lunch earns more on Wednesday. Spending
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on launch to $2400 on Monday which
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by Tuesday accounted as $2450 on the same day of the
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, expending on
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dinner
$3623 and $3850
respectively
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week
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spend
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for lunch is
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$ 2559
, in the following day lunch earn the same amount of
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as in the earlier day. On Friday,
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people
are spending on lunch approximately
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$ 2500
and for
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dinner
, they Expend double the amount of
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.
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on
the sixth day of the
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week
lunch and
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dinner
near about $1950 and 2900
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respectively
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money
and
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spend on
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double of lunch on weekends.
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IELTS academic . The table chart shows the sales at a small restaurant in Downtown business district

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5.5
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