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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 0AAd1

The visualization provided is a line graph which illustrates the average number of commuters traveling by different modes of transport in the UK over the period of time. The graph depicts three types of transportation such as, Car which is projected by a line which is blue in color. In the beginning of 1970 the number of people who used this mode for traveling was five million and gradually increased to approximately nine million by the year 2030 which is the highest data point compared to the other values on the graph. Coming to the next value, that is bus which is represented by a green line. Over the period of time the value has been decreasing substantially from close to four million commuters in 1970 to less than three million by the end of 2030. Lastly, train which is been represented by a yellow line which has a moderately increasing value from two million to five million by 2030. However, the car and train have a consistent number of commuters between 2000 to 2010. Overall the graph projects an insight that there are more no of o car c

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different
 modes of transport in the UK over the period of time.

The graph depicts three types of transportation such as,

Car which is projected
 by a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
 which is A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.blue
blue in color
. In the beginning of 1970 the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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used
 this mode for traveling was five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and gradually
 increased to approximately nine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 by the year 2030 which is the highest data point compared to the other values on the graph.

Coming to the next
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value
, that is
 bus which is represented
 by a green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
. Over the period of time the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
value
 has been decreasing substantially
 from close to four You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 commuters in 1970 to less than three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2030.

Lastly
, train which is been
 represented by a yellow You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
 which has a moderately
 increasing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
value
 from two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 to five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 by 2030. However
, the car and train have a consistent number of commuters Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 2000 and 2010".between 2000 and 2010
between 2000 to 2010
.

Overall
 the graph projects an insight that there are more Possible agreement error. Did you mean "noes", "nos"?noesnos
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