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The given line graph describes the amount of margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and butter, consumed over the span of 26 years. The consumption is measured in Grams. Overall, in the final years, low fat and reduced spreads were the most consumed although its use started with an extremely low level, years after the two others spreads. In contrast, there was a significant decrease in the utilization of margarine and butter despite their popularity at the first of the period. In 1981, butter had the highest amount of consumption with merely over 140 Grams, which increased between 1981 and 1986 to reach a peak of precisely 160 Grams in 1986, after this rise there was a dramatic drop throughout the period from 1986 to 2007, in which butter attained its lowest point about 40 Grams. Meanwhile, the use of margarine fluctuated from over 80 Grams to 100 Grams, then plateaued, before it started gradually decreasing to end up in 40 Grams. Consumption of low fat and reduced spreads began 15 years later after the two others kinds, exactly in 1996 with a very small quantity and then it rose sharply to arrive to marginally above 80 Grams, after which there was a slight decrease to approximately 70 Grams in 2007.

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describes
 the amount of margarine, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spreads
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
, consumed over the span of 26 years. The consumption is measured
 in Grams.

Overall
, in the final years, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spreads
 were the most consumed although its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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low
 level, years after the two others You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvanceescalationtransmissionspreadingadvancementdissemination
spreads
. In contrast
, there was a significant decrease in the utilization of margarine and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
 despite their popularity at the first
 of the period.

In 1981, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
 had the highest amount of consumption with merely
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Grams
, which increased between 1981 and 1986 to reach a peak of precisely
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Grams
 in 1986, after this rise there was a dramatic drop throughout the period from 1986 to 2007, in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
 attained its lowest point about 40 Grams.

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use
 of margarine fluctuated from over 80 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
Grams
 to 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
Grams
, then plateaued, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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started
gradually
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end
 up in 40 Grams.

Consumption of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spreads
 began 15 years later after the two others kinds, exactly in 1996 with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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small
 quantity and then it rose sharply
 to arrive to marginally
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Grams
, after which there was a slight decrease to approximately 70 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
Grams
 in 2007. 