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The table gives data about the number of individuals who communicate in a local language and communicate in as an extra language in six nations.

The table gives data about the number of individuals who communicate in a local language and communicate in as an extra language in six nations. we0Bd

The table gives data about the number of individuals who communicate in a local language and communicate in as an extra language in six nations. Overall, it can be noted that MC has the highest number of citizens who speak the native language, it is accounted for 900 million people. Meanwhile, only 190 million persons use MC as an additional language. For English, it is the second typical language in six countries with 940 million total speakers. There are 603 million people who speak this language as another language and it doubled that figure for native speakers. Hindi is the language that is spoken by 370 million humans, followed by Spanish with 350 million speakers. The figure for native speakers for A and P accounted for a little higher than 200 million people. The number of people who speak H and S as an additional language are about 120 million and 70 million which is many times higher than A speakers and P speakers, respectively. It is noticeable that the quantity of local speakers and clients of Portuguese as a subsequent language are both the most reduced figure. In the interim, MC and English clients represent an enormous number

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