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14: 35 Download Submit Report Writing Writing Task Read the question below and write an essay/interpretation of the graph/Diagram/Pie Chart/Map. Write at least 150 words The two maps below show the Sunny Island before and after its commercialization. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

14: 35 Download Submit Report Writing Writing Task Read the question below and write an essay/interpretation of the graph/Diagram/Pie Chart/Map. The two maps below show the Sunny Island before and after its commercialization. 25R06
The two maps illustrates the changes on Sunny island after the construction of some tourist facilities. The island was originally underdeveloped entirely in 1997. Over a decade many changes have been made and it is developed into a commercial area. In 1997, the island mostly comprises of forest area with very few palm trees and the island is divided by hill range with some residential area in the north. After years of construction in 1997, the island saw significantly developments, like hotels and restaurants which were spreaded all over the island. Houses in the north were replaced by some restaurants. The forest area in thee south east was untouched but on the south west side it is replaced by fishing bay spot. Besides, this the other 2 fishing bay spots were in north and west respectively
The two maps illustrates the
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into a commercial area.

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mostly
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forest area with
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few palm trees and the
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island
is divided
by hill range with
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some
residential area in the north.

After years of construction in 1997, the
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island
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saw
significantly
developments, like hotels and restaurants which were
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spreaded
all over the
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.
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in the north
were replaced
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was untouched
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IELTS academic 14: 35 Download Submit Report Writing Writing Task Read the question below and write an essay/interpretation of the graph/Diagram/Pie Chart/Map. The two maps below show the Sunny Island before and after its commercialization.

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