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Sector contribution to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000

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The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Overall, Agriculture sector tends to decrease all over the period. Industry sector slightly grows from 1960 to 1980 it’s rate about rate of Services sector, and after growth became plateau, but Services sector continues increasing rapidly from 1960 to 2000. At 1960 Agriculture sector had about 62% of contributions in India’s GDP and in 2000 became about 13%, like Industry and Services sectors at 1960. At the beginning of period Idustry sector had 16% of contributions and its peak 25% at 1980 remains the same from 1980 to 2000. Services sector started from 17% and grew up to 62% at 2000, also it’s a peak of this sector.
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contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

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, Agriculture
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tends to decrease all over the period.

Industry
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slightly
grows from 1960 to 1980 it’s rate about rate of
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Services
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, and after growth became plateau,
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Services
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continues increasing
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from 1960 to 2000.

At 1960 Agriculture
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had about 62% of contributions in India’s GDP and in 2000 became about 13%, like Industry and
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Services
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sectors
at 1960.

At the beginning of period
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Idustry
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had 16% of contributions and its peak 25% at 1980 remains the same from 1980 to
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2000. Services
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from 17% and grew up to 62% at 2000,
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IELTS academic Sector contribution to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000

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