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The tabular chart illustrates the percentage of income spent on food, electronic equipment, music and video item in the United Kingdom in 1998. The data is calibrated in percentage. Taking a closer view of table chart, it can be clearly seen that, the proportion of income adult spent on food music and video at a 25%, 5% and 10% respectively. 14 Percentages children devote on food as compared to Electronic equipment which showed only 10%. Moreover, 48% female prefer to eat on food item in the United Kingdom. Moving further, 39% children prefer on music as compared to video which showed only 12%. 10% offspring prefer to eat food item in the United Kingdom. The percentage of income spend on electronic equipment and music at 18% and 38% respectively. 40% girls prefer to listen to music as compared to video which showed only 70%. The percentage of income spend on food and electronic at 5% respectively. Overall, the most eye -catching feature of the tabular chart is that, the majority of girls spent on music. Women prefer to eat food as compared to music.
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