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transportation in newzealand

transportation in newzealand GLPMe

The chart below compares the percent of transport used by visitors around the world during the visit to New Zealand. The most popular transportation is a car which approximately 70% of visitors use during the visit. As can be seen in the chart nearly 35% of tourists use airplanes and around 32% of using a coach to transfer. Another transportation that people also use to transport is a train which is exactly 20%. The amount of people moving by boat is less than 10%. The bar chart shows not many people transfer by boat and train to visit, perhaps it is not convenient to move. Overall, the graph represents most visitors prefer using a car to move in New Zealand than other transportation.

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use
 during the visit. As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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 in the chart nearly
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 airplanes and around 32% of using a coach to transfer. Another transportation that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 moving by boat is less than 10%. The bar chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
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, perhaps it is not convenient to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
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. Overall
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 in New Zealand than other transportation. 