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transportation in newzealand GLPMe
The chart below compares the percent of transport used by visitors around the world during the visit to New Zealand. The most popular transportation is a car which approximately 70% of visitors use during the visit. As can be seen in the chart nearly 35% of tourists use airplanes and around 32% of using a coach to transfer. Another transportation that people also use to transport is a train which is exactly 20%. The amount of people moving by boat is less than 10%. The bar chart shows not many people transfer by boat and train to visit, perhaps it is not convenient to move. Overall, the graph represents most visitors prefer using a car to move in New Zealand than other transportation.
The chart below compares the percent of transport
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used
by visitors around the world during the visit to New Zealand. The most popular transportation is a car which approximately 70% of visitors
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use
during the visit. As can be
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seen
in the chart
nearly
35% of tourists
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use
airplanes and around 32% of using a coach to transfer. Another transportation that
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people
also
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
use to
transport is a train which is exactly 20%. The amount of
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people
moving by boat is less than 10%. The bar chart
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shows
not
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many
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people
transfer by boat and train
Did you mean "visiting"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to visit
, perhaps it is not convenient to
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move
.
Overall
, the graph represents most visitors prefer using a car to
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move
in New Zealand than other transportation.
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IELTS academic transportation in newzealand

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1 paragraphs
123 words
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