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hydroelectric power station , report the main features of the diagram

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the diagram portrays how the water is used to conduct electricity by the working of hydroelectric power station. the water from the river is stored with the help of the damn and during the day the doors of the intake open, the flowing water rotates the turbine which is situated on a lower level. this generates electricity in the power station which then is transferred through power lines. but during the night, the water from the low level reservoir moves towards the turbine, and then pumps the water to the high level reservoir. thus the picture represents how movement of water is used to make electricity during day and night
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is
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used
to conduct electricity by the working of hydroelectric power station.
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the
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water
from the river
is stored
with the
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help
of the damn and during the day the doors of the intake open, the flowing
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water
rotates the turbine which
is situated
on a lower level.
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this
generates electricity in the power station which then
is transferred
through power lines.
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but
during the night, the
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water
from the low level reservoir
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moves
towards the turbine, and then pumps the
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water
to the high level reservoir.
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thus
the picture represents how movement of
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water
is
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used
to
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make
electricity during day and
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night
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IELTS academic hydroelectric power station, report the main features of the diagram

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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