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The table chart shows how long the transports travel on the street before and after improvements. The bar chart shows how much the transport cost per kilometer.

The table chart shows how long the transports travel on the street before and after improvements. The bar chart shows how much the transport cost per kilometer. K3qpN
The table chart shows how long the transports travel on the street before and after improvements. The bar chart shows how much the transport cost per kilometer. The improvements of the transport network completed their mission well. In the table chart, we can easily see that the average journey time of the tram and bus decreased. For instance, the average journey time of the tram and the bus fell in turn from 22 to 16 minutes and 28 to 23 minutes. On the other hand, the average time of taxi and car travel on the street after improvements is higher than before improvements that increased in turn 3 and 5 minutes. Meanwhile, the bar chart revealed that the transport with the highest cost per kilometer was nearly 1. 8 euros. Following that, the cost of the car was 1 euro. It cost much more than the tram and bus which just spent less than 0. 6 euro. In conclusion, the improvements of the transport network improved the public transport network. It made public transport more modern, cheaper and faster. It also changed the habit of using transport.
The table
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how long the
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transports
travel on the street
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before
and after
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improvements
. The bar
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chart
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shows
how much the
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transport
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cost
per kilometer.

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The
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improvements
of the
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transport
network completed their mission well. In the table
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chart
, we can
easily
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that the average journey time of the tram and bus decreased.
For instance
, the average journey time of the tram and the bus fell in turn from 22 to 16 minutes and 28 to 23 minutes.
On the other hand
, the average time of taxi and car travel on the street after
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improvements
is higher than
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before
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improvements
that increased in turn 3 and 5 minutes.

Meanwhile, the bar
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chart
revealed that the
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transport
with the highest
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cost
per kilometer was
nearly
1. 8 euros. Following that, the
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cost
of the car was 1 euro. It
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cost
much more than the tram and bus which
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spent less than 0. 6
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.

In conclusion
, the
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improvements
of the
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transport
network
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improved
the public
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transport
network. It made public
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transport
more modern, cheaper and faster. It
also
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changed
the habit of using
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transport
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IELTS academic The table chart shows how long the transports travel on the street before and after improvements. The bar chart shows how much the transport cost per kilometer.

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