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Gapping between poor people and rich people are higher. Causes and solution

Gapping between poor people and rich people are higher. Causes and solution QKna9

It is general acknowledged that in cutting edge era, inflation is rapidly growing. The space between poor and wealthy people are higher in the contemporary era and there are several factors and methods which I will discuss in the upcoming fragments. Commencing with the reasons of gaping between poor and wealthy individuals, the conspicuous fact is Inflation. To elaborate, in the contemporary era, there are not provided many facilities to poor people such as food, education, medical facility and so on. Due to it, they steal things of rich people for fulfill their basic needs and feed food to their family. Sometime, they catch and they face various circumstance. Thus, they go to jail for own mistake. Eventually, they kidnap rich persons and after that they take money and then they left person. They do that crime for acquire their financial needs. However, there are various methods to control this problem, most importantly, Government should provide free education, medical facility and food to needy people and poor individuals. Nextly, government must provide some financial sport and some postion must give to needy people. In conclusion, although space between poor and rich people cause various problems such as infation and lack of facilities for needy people, but it can be controlled by implement various steps through government.

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