Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

There is too much noise in many public places in cities. what are causes of this

There is too much noise in many public places in cities. what are causes of this xxbpa
It is undeniable that in this modern era, the noise level is extremely higher in public spaces such as urban areas and so on. This essay will analysis reasons behind increasing noise and suggest methods to overcome this issue. To begin with, there are number of reasons why the level of noise is rising day by day. Firstly, these days higher number of are used to carry things, which leads to noise in cities. In other words, enough industries are introduced in urban areas rather than rural areas which require transport to carry there things. For instance, a survey conducted by Harvard university indicates that since 2010 the noise level in cities increased two times due to more and more factories. Thus, development of cities leads to noise. Secondly, surging population daily visit cities in order to get work over there. To elaborate it, it is reckoned that in urban areas people not only get more work than villages but also higher salaries, which assists them to complete their needs easily. Hence, when more people work in cities, then noise level increase automatically. However, every problem has their own solution. Noise can be decreased only if companies are moved to villages, because in rural areas there are enough empty spaces are available to establish industries. To explain it, less industries also cause less pollution which is even a beneficial points for humans. Apart from this, government should encourage to people to use public transport instead of their own. By this way noise level can be go down which aid individuals for surviving healthy life. To conclude, although noise has increased due to advancement in public places like cities, it can decreased if companies are introduced in villages rather than cities. So, then individuals feel more better as they do not have to cope with noise issues.
It is undeniable that in this modern era, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
level
is
extremely
higher in public spaces such as urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. This essay will analysis reasons behind increasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
and suggest methods to overcome this issue. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, there are number of reasons why the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
level
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
is rising day by day.
Firstly
, these days higher number of are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to carry things, which leads to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
.
In other words
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
industries
are introduced
in urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
rather
than rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
which require transport to carry
Did you mean "their"?
there
things.
For instance
, a survey conducted by
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Harvard university
indicates that since 2010 the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
level
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
increased two times due to more and more factories.
Thus
, development of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
leads to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
.
Secondly
, surging population daily visit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
work over there. To elaborate it, it
is reckoned
that in urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more work than villages
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
higher salaries, which assists them to complete their needs
easily
.
Hence
, when more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
work in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
, then
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
level
increase
automatically
.
However
, every problem has their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
solution.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Noise
can
be decreased
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to villages,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
areas
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
empty spaces are available to establish industries. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
it,
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun industries is countable.
less
industries
also
cause less pollution which is even a beneficial
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "point"?
points
for humans. Apart from this,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should encourage to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public transport
instead
of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
. By this way
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
level
can be go down which aid individuals for surviving healthy life.
To conclude
, although
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
has increased due to advancement in public places like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
, it can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "decrease"
decreased
if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
are introduced
in villages
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, then individuals feel
Use only "better" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more better
as they do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
cope with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
issues.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic There is too much noise in many public places in cities. what are causes of this

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
306 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts