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The line graph provides information about the number of students from Iran, Greece, and Turkey enrolling at Sheffield University from 2005 to 2009.

The line graph provides information about the number of students from Iran, Greece, and Turkey enrolling at Sheffield University from 2005 to 2009. yLbmM

Generally, the levels of Iranian and Turkish students who studied at University of Sheffield experienced an upward trend. On the other hand, Sheffield’s students who came from Greece showed an extreme decrease. Starting from 2005 to 2007, the figure of Iran’s and Turkey's enrolment had rose significantly, Iran’s from almost 40 students to about 70 students, and Turkey’s from 20 students to around 90 students. This trend continued until the end of the period and reached the peak of 160 students and more than 120 students respectively. By contrast, in 2005, the figure of Greek students enrolment was at 180 students. Then, it felt gradually to less than 160 students in 2006. This marked followed by a dramatic decline, where the number of students reduced by around 20 in the year 2007. It continued until the end of the given period and hit a lowest rate of approximately 42 students.

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