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How bees produce honey from nectar.

How bees produce honey from nectar. G3o6Q

The diagram shows 7 important stages of how honey is being made by bees. Overall, the process begins with bees creating a hive, then finishes when honey is ready to be collected and used. Firstly, the process commences when bees make hive for living and to produce honey. After, successfully building the hive, bees now need to find nectar from suitable flowers and trees. Then bees fly around to search for nectar. After finding the flower, bees extracts nectar from the flower and take it to the hive and place it into cells. Once this has happened, the hive needs air to evaporation the water and to produce air, bees use their wings as fast as they can. Finally, water will evaporate and then honey can be easily extracted from the hive by only squeezing it.

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 stages of how honey is being made
 by bees. Overall
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 with bees creating a hive, then finishes when honey is ready to be collected
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, the process commences when bees This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 hive for living and to produce honey. After, successfully
 building the hive, bees This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 need to find nectar from suitable flowers and trees. Then bees fly
 around to search for nectar. After finding the flower, bees extracts nectar from the flower and take it to the hive and place it into cells.

Once this has happened, the hive needs air to evaporation the water and to produce air, bees This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 their wings as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 as they can. Finally
, water will evaporate and then honey can be easily
 extracted from the hive by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 squeezing it. 