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The graph belie dhiws the weekday volume of passenger activity on the toranto metro system for july2017

The graph belie dhiws the weekday volume of passenger activity on the toranto metro system for july2017 3YjWJ
The linear representation elucidates how the count of commuters in the toranto metro system varied for july 27. The data is calibrated in thousandsPreliminary probe makes it clear that starting from 100 at 6am the count rose continuously to 200 at 7am. Afterwards, at half past seven, the count inclined skyrocketly to 400. Suddenly, it took a dip and count reached to its half till 10an. A slight growth was observed in number of passengers till 11o' clock. Moving further to remaining data, commuters count took a nosedive to 100 at 4o' click in evening. A drastic incline was noticed in visitors count at 5pm. It reached at its peak again at 400 however, it dropped sharply and became nearly 150 at 8pm. Overall, it becomes clear that before and after working hours, number of travellers boomed at Toranto metro station
The linear representation elucidates how the
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of commuters in the
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toranto
metro system varied for
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july
27. The data
is calibrated
in
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thousandsPreliminary
probe
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clear
that starting from 100 at 6am the
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count
rose
continuously
to 200 at 7am. Afterwards, at half past seven, the
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count
inclined
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skyrocketly
to 400.
Suddenly
, it took a dip and
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count
reached to its half till 10an. A slight growth
was observed
in number of passengers till 11o' clock. Moving
further
to remaining data, commuters
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count
took a nosedive to 100 at 4o' click in evening. A drastic incline
was noticed
in visitors
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count
at 5pm. It reached at its peak again at 400
however
, it dropped
sharply
and became
nearly
150 at 8pm.
Overall
, it becomes
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clear
that
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before
and after working hours, number of
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travellers
boomed at
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Toranto
metro station

IELTS academic The graph belie dhiws the weekday volume of passenger activity on the toranto metro system for july2017

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