Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The provided chart gives information

The provided chart gives information 0pjy1

Task 1 The provided chart gives information about the comparison number between Australian male and female who did regular exercise of physical activity during 2010. It was measured in percentage and divided into six different age categories. Overall, it can be seen that most of woman’s age group had lower percentage of physical activity than the man group. The higher percentage number of man who did physical activity occur in the middle age of adult that was 45 to 54 years old. Different with the man, the percentage number of woman reach its peak in young to adulthood group that was 15 to 24 years old. In the first group of age, female who was placed into young to adulthood group 15 to 24 years old have the higher number than male. Over 52. 8% female in this group did the physical activity while the number male was 5% below the female. In contrast to the second age group, percentage number of female was significant decreased into 42. 2% when the number of man slightly rise into 48. 9%. In the middle age with range 35 to 44 years old, the man who interest to did physical move climb gradually while the woman activity fell sharply into 39. 5%. In the following range of age, that was 45 to 64 years old both of man and woman group interest to did more physical activity. In the chart, it can be seen that the percentage number for both of them was increased steadily. However, in an old range of age over 65 years old the physical activity for man and woman had the same level although had a slightly different number. Task 2 Several people assume that it is better to share much information we have in scientific experiment, business industry and academic study for others. While, the other people have different argument, they believe that keep valuable and beneficial information is better way and can not to be shared for free. However, in my own opinion though both of the groups have a following reason, I agree that share information without pay anything is better than give charge of it. With regards of individual, valuable information which shared to other people through social media, printed media or the other kind of media have a big impact for each individual person. For an instance, a journal research by student that published in university’s website can be opened by the other people in different areas even countries who has same research topic. The informations written in journal will support other student, lecturer and researcher to finish their experiment. In the other words, one information can support other researcher to produce more valuable information. It can not be imagine, how the world would be better if all of beneficial information is shared freely and support the development of infrastructure and academic field in a country. In contrast to the first assumption, all valuable information have to be charge and can not be shared for free. The possible reason which support the argument is because the high price of some research. Moreover, the time needed to done the research is long. They have to face many problem and obstacle to finish their work. For an instance, to done the university’s thesis a student have to spend money to distribute a questionnaire for the respondent. In addition, they also need time approximately one month for prepare their material and two months for the analysis. Because of this reason, some people assume that a valuable information is can not to be shared freely consider to their sacrifice to done their work. In conclusion, although both of the argument has their following reason, in my own opinion I agree that the first argument is better. Freely information can support other people to done their work and give many advantages to support their countries to be developed.

Task 1

The provided chart gives You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 about the comparison You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 between Australian male and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 did regular exercise of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 during 2010. It was measured
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 and divided into six You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 categories.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that most of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 had lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
. The higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 did You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 occur in the middle You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of adult that was 45 to 54 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
Different
 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
 reach its peak in young to adulthood You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 that was 15 to 24 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
.

In the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
was placed
 into young to adulthood You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 15 to 24 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 have the higher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 than male. Over 52. 8% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 did the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 male was 5% below the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
. In contrast
 to the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 was significant decreased into 42. 2% when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
slightly
 rise into 48. 9%. In the middle You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 with range 35 to 44 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 interest to did You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 climb gradually
 while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 fell sharply
 into 39. 5%.

In the following range of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
, that was 45 to 64 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 both of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group
 interest to did more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 the chart, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 for both of them was increased
steadily
. However
, in an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 range of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 over 65 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrealsubstantialnaturalenvironmental
physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
 had the same level although had a slightly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 number.

Task 2

Several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 assume that it is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 to share much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 we have in scientific experiment, business industry and academic study for others. While, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquabbleclashexchangebrawldisagreementcontroversy
argument
, they believe that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitablebeneficialrelevantusefulhelpfulcostly
valuable
 and beneficial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 is Please check whether an article is missing: "a better".a better
better
 way and can not to be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
 for free. However
, in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 opinion though both of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
 have a following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that share You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 without pay anything is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 than give charge of it.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards of
 individual, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitablebeneficialrelevantusefulhelpfulcostly
valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 through social media, printed media or the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 kind of media have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 impact for each individual person. For an instance, a journal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 by student that published in university’s website can be opened
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 areas even countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
Did you mean "have", "haven"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'countries' should be used.havehaven
has
 same Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "researched".researched
research
 topic. The The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?information
informations
 written in journal will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 student, lecturer and researcher to finish their experiment. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 words, one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 researcher to produce more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitablebeneficialrelevantusefulhelpfulcostly
valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
. It can not be Consider using a past participle here: "imagined".imagined
imagine
, how the world would be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 if all of beneficial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
freely
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
 the development of infrastructure and academic field in a country.

In contrast
 to the first
 assumption, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitablebeneficialrelevantusefulhelpfulcostly
valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be charge and can not be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
 for free. The possible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
 which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquabbleclashexchangebrawldisagreementcontroversy
argument
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the high price of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
. Moreover
, the time needed Did you mean "to do"?to do
to done
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 is long. They This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 face Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: "many problems".many problems
many problem
 and obstacle to finish their work. For an instance, Did you mean "to do"?to do
to done
 the university’s thesis a student This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 spend money to distribute a questionnaire for the respondent. In addition
, they also
 need time approximately one month for prepare their material and two months for the analysis. Because of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 assume that a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitablebeneficialrelevantusefulhelpfulcostly
valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 is Consider using a past participle here: "canned".canned
can
 not to be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
freely
 consider to their sacrifice to done their work.

In conclusion
, although both of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquabbleclashexchangebrawldisagreementcontroversy
argument
 has their following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
, in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 opinion I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquabbleclashexchangebrawldisagreementcontroversy
argument
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
. Freely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to done their work and give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 advantages to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
 their countries to be developed
. 