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Telephone call in Finland

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The given bar graph shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in Finland are divided into three categories between 1995 and 2004. It is apparent that the telephone call by local-landline the highest throughout the period, rising from 12000 millions minutes in 1995 to 17000 million minute in 2001. After peaking at 17000 million minutes, this categories had fallen back to the 1995 figure by 2004. In addition, tho telephone call by national and international- landline steadily from 6000 million minutes to about 11000 million- minuter at the end of the given period. There was increase in telephone calls mobiles from almost none to almost 11000 million'" minute. Overall, although telephone calls types were the highest in 2004, the gap between the three categories narrowed significantly in the second half of the period.
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the total number of minutes of
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calls
in Finland
are divided
into three categories between 1995 and 2004.

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call
by local-landline the highest throughout the period, rising from 12000
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millions
minutes

in 1995 to 17000
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minute
in 2001. After peaking at
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17000 million
minutes,
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categories had fallen back to the 1995 figure by 2004.

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, tho
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telephone
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call
by national and international-

landline
steadily
from 6000
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million
minutes to about 11000 million-

minuter at the
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end
of the
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period. There was increase in

telephone
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calls
mobiles from almost none to almost 11000 million'
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minute.

Overall
, although
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types were the highest in 2004, the gap between the three categories narrowed
significantly
in the second half of the period.

IELTS academic Telephone call in Finland

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  American English
4 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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