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The supplied chart delineates the changes in migration from countryside to cities by citizens of Russia, Iran and Indonesia and what are the forecast for the period before 2025.

The supplied chart delineates the changes in migration from countryside to cities by citizens of Russia, Iran and Indonesia and what are the forecast for the period before 2025. DB5o
The supplied chart delineates the changes in migration from countryside to cities by citizens of Russia, Iran and Indonesia and what are the forecast for the period before 2025. At the outset it is clear, that urbanization had overwhelming impact on population of Iran and Russia, moreover it is predicted to rise in the future. On the contrast, Indonesians have fractional variation in the number of people who moved to the city side, and there is no expectation to break this tendency. For the first ten years, Russia rapidly increased the portion of urban inhabitants by 3 times, moreover in 2010 the speed of movement from rural areas became faster and for the next 5 years the number of cities population again tripled. Although, there is almost the same amount of growth in Iran, it can be observed that Iranians had very slow movement trend before 2005, and after this period they gained momentum rapidly and still has the same urbanization upward trend with the forecast to increase cities population by roughly 9 times in 2025. On the contrast to Iran and Russia, Indonesia just marginally rose the number of citified inhabitants and it is just going to be tripled in 2025.
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by citizens of Russia, Iran and Indonesia and what are the forecast for the period
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2025.

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clear
, that urbanization had overwhelming impact on population of Iran and Russia,
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is predicted
to rise in the future. On the contrast, Indonesians have fractional variation in the number of
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people
who
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moved
to the city side, and there is no expectation to break this tendency.

For the
first
ten years, Russia
rapidly
increased the portion of urban inhabitants by 3 times,
moreover
in 2010 the speed of movement from rural areas became faster and for the
next
5 years the number of
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cities
population again tripled. Although, there is almost the same amount of growth in Iran, it can
be observed
that Iranians had
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very
slow movement trend
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before
2005, and after this period they gained momentum
rapidly
and
still
has the same urbanization upward trend with the forecast to increase
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cities
population by roughly 9 times in 2025.

On the contrast to Iran and Russia, Indonesia
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just
marginally
rose the number of citified inhabitants and it is
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just
going to
be tripled
in 2025.
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IELTS academic The supplied chart delineates the changes in migration from countryside to cities by citizens of Russia, Iran and Indonesia and what are the forecast for the period before 2025.

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