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The given line graph describes the people’s movement from rural to urban areas in three different states and shows how it will go in the future.

The given line graph describes the people’s movement from rural to urban areas in three different states and shows how it will go in the future. NYa2
The given line graph describes the people’s movement from rural to urban areas in three different states and shows how it will go in the future. Overall, by the given chart it can be clear that replacing to urban areas will grow in the future by predictions. In 2000, all three countries started their ways already from the same point, around 10 and 15 million. And at the beginning the Republic of Russia stood at about 15 million. Over the period 2010 and 2015 immigration of Russian people increased considerably and continued growing. For the time till 2010, the amount of immigrants reached approximately 40-45. Iran showed very slightly effect on going up between 2000 and 2005 and rose only to 10, after what it rose significantly and took 35 million on the time as same as Russia. While, Russia and Iran kept up growing, Indonesia did not appear speedy rising, and begun to rise slowly till the 2020. In the time, when, other countries will climb quickly by the shown predictions, however, Indonesia wil not have any changes, and will remain constantly at point 30 million. (187)
The
given
line graph
describes
the
people
’s movement from rural to urban areas in three
different
states and
shows
how it will go in the future.

Overall
, by the
given
chart it can be
clear
that replacing to urban areas will grow in the future by predictions.

In 2000, all three countries
started
their ways already from the same point, around 10 and 15
million
. And at the beginning the Republic of Russia stood at about 15
million
. Over the period 2010 and 2015 immigration of Russian
people
increased
considerably
and continued growing. For the time till 2010, the amount of immigrants reached approximately 40-45. Iran
showed
very
slightly
effect on going up between 2000 and 2005 and rose
only
to 10, after what it rose
significantly
and took 35
million
on the time as same as Russia. While, Russia and Iran
kept
up growing, Indonesia did not appear speedy rising, and begun to rise
slowly
till the 2020.

In the time, when, other countries will climb
quickly
by the shown predictions,
however
, Indonesia
wil
not have any
changes
, and will remain
constantly
at point 30
million
. (187)
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IELTS academic The given line graph describes the people’s movement from rural to urban areas in three different states and shows how it will go in the future.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
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