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The table chart compares and contrasts the amount of time spent by men and women of 3 various age groups on different fun activities.

The table chart compares and contrasts the amount of time spent by men and women of 3 various age groups on different fun activities. 75jy2
The table chart compares and contrasts the amount of time spent by men and women of 3 various age groups on different fun activities. In general, for each age group, the male gave more time in every interest except Meditation and Yoga, which was led by a female. The interests with the most difference in the ratio were observed for Baseball and Basketball with 87: 2 and 97: 22 respectively. Also, these were the top two activities that men preferred. There was a significant increase in Fishing for them. It started with 12% and rose close to triple in the 36-45 age group. Whereas, the opposite sex had close to no attraction towards this activity. Similarly, in cricket too there was no involvement from the women. Fishing and Yoga saw a remarkable growth amongst females, where for earlier one, it saw an incline of double rate for each of the following gamut. And, the latter values soar noticeably from 7% to 33% and ended with 42%.
The table chart compares and contrasts the amount of time spent by
men
and women of 3 various age groups on
different
fun activities.

In general
, for each age group, the male gave more time in every interest except Meditation and Yoga, which
was led
by a female.

The interests with the most difference in the ratio
were observed
for Baseball and Basketball with 87: 2 and 97: 22
respectively
.
Also
, these were the top two activities that
men
preferred. There was a significant increase in Fishing for them. It
started
with 12% and rose close to triple in the 36-45 age group.
Whereas
, the opposite sex had close to no attraction towards this activity.
Similarly
, in cricket too there was no involvement from the women.

Fishing and Yoga
saw
a remarkable growth amongst females, where for earlier one, it
saw
an incline of double rate for each of the following gamut. And, the latter values soar
noticeably
from 7% to 33% and ended with 42%.
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