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The assigned horizontal chart provide the information about the number of hours in which youngster spend on 7activities in Chester between 2002 to 2007From the overall analysis, it is manifest that teenagers most interested to watching television as compared to other activities.

The assigned horizontal chart provide the information about the number of hours in which youngster spend on 7activities in Chester between 2002 to 2007From the overall analysis, it is manifest that teenagers most interested to watching television as compared to other activities. J0nJ0
The assigned horizontal chart provide the information about the number of hours in which youngster spend on 7activities in Chester between 2002 to 2007From the overall analysis, it is manifest that teenagers most interested to watching television as compared to other activities. In details it is crystal clear that the teenager watching television in 2007 in 2006 and 2005 amounted to 38, 37 and 35 respectively. The number of hours was same in 2003 and 2002 for watching television. The teenagers spend 18 hours per week for going to disco in 2007. The teenagers slend 11 hours in 2006 2005 and 2004. The number of hours were decline in 2003 and it was noticed that 10 the number of hours which was banned on shopping what was 6, 12 in 2003 2002 and 2004. Probing further teenagers were laps interested in boiling as compared to other activities. It was noticed at almost to in all servals years. The highest number of hours that teenagers spend on watching DVDs was 17 in 2004 but in 2003 the number of hours were to times decline. They were little difference between the number of hours that youngesters spend on watching DVDs in 2006 and 2007. The highest number of hours that teenagers spend for doing sport 10 in 2002. In chester devoted much less time to doing homework which started at 10 hours in 2002 and declined to 7 in 2007.
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in which youngster
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on 7activities in Chester between 2002 to 2007From the
overall
analysis, it is manifest that
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teenagers
most interested to watching television as compared to other activities. In
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that the
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teenager
watching television in 2007 in 2006 and 2005 amounted to 38, 37 and 35
respectively
. The
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number
of
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hours
was same in 2003 and 2002 for watching television. The
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teenagers
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spend
18
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per week for going to disco in 2007.
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The
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teenagers
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slend
11
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hours
in 2006 2005 and 2004.
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The
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of
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were decline in 2003 and it
was noticed
that 10 the
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of
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hours
which
was banned
on shopping what was 6, 12 in 2003 2002 and 2004. Probing
further
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teenagers
were laps interested in boiling as compared to other activities. It
was noticed
at almost to in all
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servals
years. The highest
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on watching DVDs was 17 in 2004
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in 2003 the
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were to
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times
decline. They were
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difference between the
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youngesters
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on watching DVDs in 2006 and 2007. The highest
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that
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for doing sport 10 in 2002. In
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chester
devoted much less time to doing homework which
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in 2002 and declined to 7 in 2007.

IELTS academic The assigned horizontal chart provide the information about the number of hours in which youngster spend on 7activities in Chester between 2002 to 2007From the overall analysis, it is manifest that teenagers most interested to watching television as compared to other activities.

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