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The diagrt shows how concentrated apple juice is produced.

The diagrt shows how concentrated apple juice is produced. WYwKb

The diagram illustrates the phases and apparatus of producing concentrated apple juice from Apple. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that there are a total of 11 stages in this process, commencing with harvesting and selecting pertinent apples and culminating in labeling and sealing for sale. The process initiates with the apples being selected for subsequent process. In the second stage, fresh apples are passed through a receiving belt before sending them for wash and sort. Following that, apples are grindered in apple grinder after which it is poured in a pressing machine. Similarly, cetrifuger helps in the seperation of water from Apple concentration. The seven stage involves the filtration of concentration. After that, concentration is being heated at 80°C in posteurization. Likewise, concentrated apple juice is filled in the bottle before packaging. Finally, the process concludes with the filled bottles being packaged and marketed for sale.

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apples
 and culminating in labeling and sealing for sale.

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cetrifuger
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helps
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process
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