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The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2004 Write report describing the sales figures of various types of publications based on the information shown in the table

The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2004 Write report describing the sales figures of various types of publications based on the information shown in the table BJ28m
The table shows the three different types of literature being sold for the month of February 2000. Also, it mentions whether it has been sold to Non-Book Club Members or Book Club Members. The overall table has three different kinds of literature, namely; Fiction, Non-fiction, and Magazines. Sales of Fiction is similar for both Book Club Members then Non-Book Club Members. At the same time, Sales of Non-fiction is higher among Book Club Members than Non-Book Members. Sales of Magazines shows follows the same trend as Non-fiction. Furthermore, Fiction is the least popular among the students with total sales of 151. Following it, Non-fiction is the second most selling category with a total of 1287. Magazines are the most popular and with the highest number of sales with 1696. Also, college students are the ones who are major buyers except for the Fiction category. College staff follows with the second most buyers and Members of Public are the least.
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Fiction
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then Non-Book
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of Non-fiction is higher among Book
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than Non-Book
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Sales
of Magazines
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follows the same trend as Non-fiction.

Furthermore
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Fiction
is the least popular among the students with total
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sales
of 151. Following it, Non-fiction is the second most selling category with a total of 1287. Magazines are the most popular and with the highest number of
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with 1696.

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, college students are the ones who are major buyers
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except for
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Fiction
category. College staff follows with the second most buyers and
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Members
of Public are the least.
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IELTS academic The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2004 Write report describing the sales figures of various types of publications based on the information shown in the table

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