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The table below shows the unemployement rates in 2000 for men and women

The table below shows the unemployement rates in 2000 for men and women Eq5Db

The graph shows information about how many both genders were unemployed in different countries in 2000. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that, a number of developing countries as Morocco and Belize registered higher rates compared to possessed development. It can be seen that Morocco has the highest unemployment rate at 22% on average, which was followed by Belize at 12, 7% for both sexes. In all most countries, women have more tendency to be unemployed than men. In Morocco, the figure is 27, 6% and 20, 3% and with Belize, it is 20, 3% and 8, 8% respectively. In contrast, in some undeveloped countries, the proportion of unemployment are likely to be much lower. For instance, only 3, 3% are reported in Netherlands, 4, 7% in Japan, and 6, 5% in Australia don’t have any works. Furthermore, except Netherlands, these countries have more unemployed men than women. The rate among men in Australia is 6, 7% compared to 6, 5% of women. A similar trend was witnessed in Japan with the figure of unemployed males is 4, 9%, which was higher than the female(4, 5%). In Netherlands, the proportion of women who have no career is twice as much as the figure of men, with figures 4, 2% and 2, 6%.

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