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In the different parts of the world, some nations believe that, its important to spend money on railways tracks so, it enables them to commute faster while in some parts of the world, nations believe that governments should improve the existing transport system rather than developing new railway system.

In the different parts of the world, some nations believe that, its important to spend money on railways tracks so, it enables them to commute faster while in some parts of the world, nations believe that governments should improve the existing transport system rather than developing new railway system. 1byjG
In the different parts of the world, some nations believe that, its important to spend money on railways tracks so, it enables them to commute faster while in some parts of the world, nations believe that governments should improve the existing transport system rather than developing new railway system. The Modern Railway systems are quite important in the development of the modern transport system in any country. The Railways provide the faster way to commute as compared, to the other transports, because you can easily avoid traffic jams and save time. If the Railway system of the country is quite faster then it provides comfort to not only the customers but also for the business community as, they can use the same system to export their goods to the other cities. Improving existing public transport can also be beneficial, as it will be more easier to improve the existing system as compared to creating a completely new one. Spending on the existing system can save the budget and provide quick relief to the public. According to my opinion, Developing the modern fast railways are more useful and productive, because it enables, people and the business community to take advantage of the modern world-class fast system for traveling which is much faster than other transports rather than, improving the existing public transports. The fast trains or bullet trains commute at speed of above 200km per hour while, other transports cant achieve that faster speed, except the planes but using the airplanes for traveling and business is quite expensive as, if we compare it with traveling by train. So Governments, should enhance the productivity in creating the modern railway systems in the world. systems in the world.
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in any country. The
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,
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it provides comfort to not
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as compared to creating a completely new one. Spending on the
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can save the budget and provide quick relief to the public.

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fast
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railways
are more useful and productive,
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it enables,
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IELTS academic In the different parts of the world, some nations believe that, its important to spend money on railways tracks so, it enables them to commute faster while in some parts of the world, nations believe that governments should improve the existing transport system rather than developing new railway system.

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