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The chart illustrates the value of a country's amount of revenue in export for various categories(petroleum, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agriculture, textiles) during 2015 and 2016

The chart illustrates the value of a country's amount of revenue in export for various categories(petroleum, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agriculture, textiles) during 2015 and 2016 m8VKr

The chart illustrates the value of a country's amount of revenue in export for various categories(petroleum, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agriculture, textiles) during 2015 and 2016 and the table displays the proportional change in 2016 compared with 2015 in each classification of exports. Units are measured in dollar billions. Overall, the profit in 2016 was higher than that of in 2015 among all commodity categories. Both in 2015 and 2016 the maximum earnings were from petroleum products and engineered goods. While the least profit incurred from the agricultural products and the textiles. Firstly, in 2016 the most money-making export which is petroleum gained about 3% more in the category than the year 2015. However, for the gems and jewelry, the percentage of the export profit decreased by 5. 18% by the year 2016. Next, engineered goods revenue also follow the foot prints of petroleum products profit by gaining more than 8% in 2016 than 2015. The value increases from more than 50 billions to above 60 billions. This also indicates the growth of engineers in the country. Besides, that the agricultural products and textile also earned more with 0. 8% and 15. 24% respectively. The statistics states that the profit was increased by more than 15. 24% in the year 2016 based on the year 2015. Textile products earned about well over 25 billions in 2015 and earned more than 30 billion in the next year.

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. The statistics states that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductgoodssavingsurplusrevenueturnout
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 2016 based on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
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