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The map in the left depicts the site of an airport now while the plan on the right describes its site after redesign and reconstruction next year.

The map in the left depicts the site of an airport now while the plan on the right describes its site after redesign and reconstruction next year. 8Gywr

The map on the left depicts the site of an airport now, while the plan on the right describes its site after redesign and reconstruction next year. Overall, it is clear that the airport's area will be expanded with more entrances, and more facilities will be provided. There will be a significant difference for the area before the customs. The upper part will be redeveloped into a V shape with gates increased from 8 to 18, and the walkway will be replaced by a sky train. Moreover, a shop will appear in the position of the train's destination towards the customs. For the area behind customs, more facilities will be placed. More entrances will be made both in the departure and arrival sections. The cafe and the check-in will still be kept but with its position changed inside the departure section. A bag drop place will be installed in that section. For the arrival section, a cafe and ATM will be added. Also, a space expanded in the right bottom will be provided for the new car hire service.

The map on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 depicts the site of an airport This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, while the plan on the right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 its site after redesign and reconstruction next
 year.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the airport's area will be expanded
 with more entrances, and more facilities will be provided
.

There will be a significant difference for the area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the customs. The upper part will be redeveloped
 into a V shape with gates increased from 8 to 18, and the walkway will be replaced
 by a sky train. Moreover
, a shop will appear in the position of the train's destination towards the customs.

For the area behind customs, more facilities will be placed
. More entrances will be made
 both in the departure and arrival You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
sections
. The 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in will still
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with its position This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 inside the departure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
. A bag drop place will be installed
 in that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
. For the arrival You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and ATM will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Also
, a space expanded in the right bottom will be provided
 for the new car hire service. 