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The table below shows the share of companies advertising expenditure in different media sectors in three countries (Australia, Vietnam, Japan) in 2005

The table below shows the share of companies advertising expenditure in different media sectors in three countries (Australia, Vietnam, Japan) in 2005 mNlK

The table clearly displays and compares shares of companies advertising expenditure in four categories of media in three different countries in the year 2015. Overall, it is clear that companies in three countries spent the highest percentage on TV. By contrast, the lowest figures were for spending on the internet in each country. As the graph shows, the proportion of TV in Japan remained the highest rate at 61%, while there was a notably massive drop in the Internet sector in Japan, at only 3%. Similarly, the percentage of TV’s data in Vietnam and Australia accounted for almost 45% and 31%, respectively. Whilst, the figure in both Vietnam and Australia decreased sharply in the Internet at around 5% in 2015. Vietnam headed the table for the newspaper sector at 29%, compared with 22% in Australia and more than 15% in Japan. By comparison, the data of 14% in Japan remained the lower figure with other countries, when Australia and Vietnam have equal proportions in the money spent on the radio sector, at 21%.

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