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The table below shows the sales at Le Petit Cafe in downtown Paris from 21 January 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the sales at Le Petit Cafe in downtown Paris from 21 January 2019. 2xwLx
The table displays the weekly sales figures at Le Petit Café in the downtown area of Paris indicating the Breakfast and Lunch data from the 21st of January (Monday) to 26th of January (Saturday) 2019. It indicates the revenue earned during the Breakfast and lunch hours over the week. The sales figures remained more or less the same from Monday to Thursday, and peaked on Friday to Saturday. During the week, the Breakfast sales averaged at approximately €1300 and the lunch sales at €2500. The lowest sales for Breakfast was recorded on Wednesday at €1200 and the highest was recorded on Saturday at €1850, it remained steady for the rest of the week. Similar to the Breakfast sales, the lunch sales had the lowest sale noted down on Wednesday at €2150 and the peaked on Saturday at €3950. Both the sales showed rapid growth on Friday to Saturday. In Conclusion, the most profitable day of the week was observed on Saturday, followed by Friday. While Wednesday was the least profitable day observed.
The table displays the weekly
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figures at Le
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Petit
Café in the downtown area of Paris indicating the
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Breakfast
and Lunch data from the 21st of January (Monday) to 26th of January
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(Saturday)
2019. It indicates the revenue earned during the
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Breakfast
and lunch hours over the
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week
. The
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sales
figures remained more or less the same from Monday to Thursday, and peaked on Friday to Saturday.

During the
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, the
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Breakfast
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sales
averaged at approximately €1300 and the lunch
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at €2500. The lowest
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for
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Breakfast
was recorded
on Wednesday at €1200 and the highest
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on
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Saturday
at €1850, it remained steady for the rest of the
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. Similar to the
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Breakfast
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, the lunch
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had the lowest
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noted down on Wednesday at €2150 and the peaked on
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Saturday
at €3950. Both the
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rapid growth on Friday to Saturday.

In Conclusion
, the most profitable day of the
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was observed
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Saturday
, followed by Friday.
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Wednesday was the least profitable day observed.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the sales at Le Petit Cafe in downtown Paris from 21 January 2019.

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