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The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.

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The table depicts the information of a survey which was taken to find out what the members of city sports club think about the club activities, facilities and opening hours. The table data clearly shows that the club members in the range of activities were mostly liked by males. More than a half of male members were satisfied, also 40% of males were satisfied. It was almost a negligible percent in which male members were not satisfied. As such, female members were less positive than that of male members. In the category of very satisfied and satisfied, female members showed equal percent of response which was 35%, respectively. Also, the number of female members which were not satisfied was more than that of male members, the 30% of females were not satisfied. Furthermore, for club facilities, members of both gender showed almost same response for three of these categories. In very satisfied category, the female members were 64% and male members were 63% which was almost same. For satisfied category, males were more positive which was 27% and females were at 22% of all. There was a small difference of 4% between the response of male and female members for the category of not satisfied. Moreover, female members were the most, who were very satisfied for the opening hours, which was 72% out of 100%. Male members who were very satisfied for opening hours were less, comparatively to females. Also, female were the one who were satisfied more than that of male members, which was a quarter out of whole. The male members were the one who were not satisfied, which was 37% of all. To sum up, it can be seen that for the range of activities, females were the one who responded less than that of male members. Also, there was a minor difference for the facilities the club offered. Although, opening hours was mostly liked by female members, male members responded negative for the same.
The table depicts the information of a survey which
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of city sports
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think
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activities, facilities and opening
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. The table data
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. It was almost a negligible percent in which male
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female
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was more than that of male
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facilities,
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almost same response for three of these
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categories
. In
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very
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were 64% and male
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for the opening
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members
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club
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female
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members
, male
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responded
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IELTS academic The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.

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328 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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