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The given line graph illustrates the excretion of Nitrogen oxide from the diesel, petrol car, lorries and buses.

The given line graph illustrates the excretion of Nitrogen oxide from the diesel, petrol car, lorries and buses. P0pg
The given line graph illustrates the excretion of Nitrogen oxide from the diesel, petrol car, lorries and buses. Overall emissions from the brushes and lorries have similar Trend. Firstly drops and then it increased. Likewise diesel and petrol car follow the similar pattern. According to the graph at the lower speed of 10 kilometre per hour buses produced 40 gram per kilometre it gradually decrease at 60 km per hour. Proportion of omission who are the quarter full stop the release of Nitrogen oxide as a gain rise and reached at 45 gram per kilometre of excretion. Similarly Lori show drip 10 but emission was less than buses. The release of Nitrogen oxide from petrol car and diesel car show similar pattern. From the diesel kar least emission occurred. Petrol ka producers around 10 gram per kilometre at lowest speed.
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line graph illustrates the excretion of Nitrogen oxide from the
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diesel
,
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petrol
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car
, lorries and buses.

Overall
emissions from the brushes and lorries have similar Trend.
Firstly
drops and then it increased.
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Likewise
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diesel
and
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petrol
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car
follow the similar pattern.

According to the graph at the lower speed of 10
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kilometre
per hour buses produced 40
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gram
per
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kilometre
it
gradually
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decrease
at 60 km per hour. Proportion of omission who are the quarter full
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stop
the release of Nitrogen oxide as a gain rise and reached at 45
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gram
per
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kilometre
of excretion.
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Similarly
Lori
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show
drip 10
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but
emission was less than buses.

The release of Nitrogen oxide from
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petrol
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car
and
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diesel
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car
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similar pattern. From the
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diesel
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kar
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least
emission occurred.
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Petrol
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ka
producers around 10
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gram
per
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kilometre
at lowest speed.
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IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the excretion of Nitrogen oxide from the diesel, petrol car, lorries and buses.

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