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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the outcome of a participation in cultural activities over a year, based on 6800 Scottish adults. In general, any execution involving dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and performing had the highest degree of support, with 22% of the respondents participating in the past 12 months. By distinction, computer based exercises had the lowest degree of support – 6%. Groups of people aged 45 and 74 years old were more likely to attempt to do something related to arts -22%, while activities were more likely to take place among 16 and 24 years of age – 35%. The disparities among age ranges were particularly marked in the visual arts and writing categories, where participation rates were around three times higher for teenagers than for older people. It is clear from the data that age plays a major role in the success of the mentioned cultural activities.
The chart
shows
the outcome of a participation in cultural activities over a year, based on 6800 Scottish adults.

In general
, any execution involving dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and performing had the highest degree of support, with 22% of the respondents participating in the past 12 months. By distinction, computer based exercises had the lowest degree of support
6%.

Groups of
people
aged 45 and 74 years
old
were more likely to attempt to do something related to arts -22%, while activities were more likely to take place among 16 and 24 years of age
35%. The disparities among age ranges were
particularly
marked in the visual arts and writing categories, where participation rates were around three times higher for
teenagers
than for older
people
. It is
clear
from the data that age plays a major role in the success of the mentioned cultural activities.
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IELTS academic The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

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  American English
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148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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