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The diagram shows the environmental issues raised by a product over it's life cycle.

The diagram depits the impact of a product on an environmental during it's lifetime. Overall, seven steps are involved starting from planning and design and culminating in recycling. First, the product is planned and designed with the aid of a computer, then the designed products are conveyed by a truck to an industrial area where the materials and energy resources are consumed, this is followed by production which is the next stage after which the are packaged and distributed to shops and houses for sales. After the packaged products have been disseminated to different homes and shops for purchases, they are being used by the consumers who in turn dispose the remnants of the used goods. Once the used products are thrown away, they are picked up again for recycling which is the final stage. Feedback is also given and the steps begin again,

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product
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products
are conveyed
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houses
 for sales.

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products
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different
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purchases
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used
 by the consumers who in turn dispose the remnants of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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goods
. Once the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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products
are thrown
 away, they are picked
 up again for recycling which is the final stage. Feedback is also
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given
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begin
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