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The table below shows the results of a study into charitable giving around the world, conducted in 2011.

The table below shows the results of a study into charitable giving around the world, conducted in 2011. Ew21x
The table illustrates the results of giving charity globally which was organized in the year 2011. Overall, Countries like Australia and Hongkong is standing in the same proportion of people contributing fund towards charity. However, China had the least ratio of its population give money to the charity than either Australia and Hongkong. Moreover, the percentage of people volunteering their time to an organization in Australia was nearly ten times higher than in china. To begin with, Around 64% people from Qatar decided to provide fund for charity and the population from Panama raised their fund which was figured at about 35%. Moreover, countries like South Korea and China had the least proportion of people who really wanted to share the money as charity ranged approximately 27% and 11% respectively. Australia and Hongkong figured in same proportion which raised the charity fund. However, 73% people from Thailand who spend money for charity that outweigh rest of the countries. In terms of volunteering, Thailand and Qatar are in equal ratios at around 18%. On Accounting at 22% of South Korean where volunteering the organization followed by Panama population with a dip of 1%. For volunteering the Organization Hong Kong and China figured the least rate around 13% and 4% respectively. In Contrast Australia stands out at the highest percentage of multitudes who have volunteered time for the organization.
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is standing in the same proportion of
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people
contributing
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towards
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charity
.
However
, China had the least ratio of its population give money to the
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charity
than either Australia and
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Hongkong
.
Moreover
, the percentage of
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people
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volunteering
their time to an
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organization
in Australia was
nearly
ten times higher than in
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china
.

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with, Around 64%
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people
from Qatar decided to provide
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for
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charity
and the population from Panama raised their
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fund
which
was figured
at about 35%.
Moreover
, countries like South Korea and China had the least proportion of
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people
who
really
wanted to share the money as
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ranged approximately 27% and 11%
respectively
. Australia and
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Hongkong
figured in same proportion which raised the
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charity
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.
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, 73%
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people
from Thailand who spend money for
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charity
that outweigh rest of the countries.

In terms of
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volunteering
, Thailand and Qatar are in equal ratios at around 18%. On Accounting at 22% of South Korean where
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the
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followed by Panama population with a dip of 1%. For
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Hong Kong and China figured the least rate around 13% and 4%
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. In
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