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map of an airport now and a year after

map of an airport now and a year after Nl5e0

Given are the maps providing us with information regarding the renovation of an airport now and then in the succeeding year. Overall, it is starkly apparent that many new facilities would be constructed during the rebuilding, while some parts of the old airport would stay pristine. When scrutinizing more rigorously, it can be inferred that at the arrivals part, an ATM machine and a café would be added. Moreover, a new car hire sector would be springing up in the vicinity of the second entrance on the right side. Meanwhile, in the center of the departure, the café would be conveyed from northeast to the southeast of the center. Another transferring would have occurred for check-in which would move from left to the opposite side. A new bag drop also would be developed there. Security passport control in both departures and arrivals buildings would stay untouched. Turning to the space above the eastern security passport control, a new retail market would be built there. The number of gates, additionally, would increase from 8 to 18 and the area would become more spacious. The access of the passengers to the gates would alter too. Not only would it be changed into a sky train instead of a walkway but also, it would move to the center of the area.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "is".is
are
 the maps providing us with information regarding the renovation of an airport This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and then in the succeeding year.

Overall
, it is starkly
 apparent that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 facilities would be constructed
 during the rebuilding, while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 parts of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 airport would stay pristine.

When scrutinizing more rigorously
, it can be inferred
 that at the arrivals part, an This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply "ATM".ATM
ATM machine
 and a café would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Moreover
, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 car hire sector would be springing up in the vicinity of the second entrance on the right side. Meanwhile, in the center of the departure, the café would be conveyed
 from northeast to the southeast of the center. Another transferring would have occurred for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in which would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to the opposite side. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 bag drop also
 would be developed
 there. Security passport control in both departures and arrivals buildings would stay untouched.

Turning to the space above the eastern security passport control, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 retail market would be built
 there. The number of gates, additionally
, would increase from 8 to 18 and the area would become more spacious. The access of the passengers to the gates would alter too. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 would it be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a sky train instead
 of a walkway This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
, it would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to the center of the area. 