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Due to the rapid development of the smartphone market, this method of image collection can replace all existing detection methods. In addition, smartphones are user-friendly, inexpensive, and do not require much technical knowledge. Some research groups have developed programs for the direct collection and processing of images with a smartphone without the need for a computer. In addition, some RGB programs for color space analysis are offered for free.
Due to the rapid development of the smartphone market, this method of image collection can replace all existing detection methods.
In addition
, smartphones are user-friendly, inexpensive, and do not require much technical knowledge.
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research groups have developed programs for the direct collection and processing of images with a smartphone without the need for a computer.
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RGB programs for color space analysis
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