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The bar chart shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950,1970,1990

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In 1950, the contribution to agriculture sector at the highest with 35% and self employment had lowest with 7%. The proportion of service sector at second highest with 27. 5%. In 1970, the percentage of agriculture was greatly decreased from 35% to 18%. The proportion of self employment and industries had marginally increased by 25%. In 1990, the proportion of self employment at the highest with 37%. Service Sector had greatly decreased from 27% in 1970 to 7% in 1990. The percentage of agriculture at the lowest with 10%. Overall, the agriculture proportion was at the highest in 1950 and it had lowest in 1990.
In 1950, the contribution to
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agriculture
sector at the highest with 35% and self employment had lowest with 7%. The
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proportion
of service sector at second highest with 27. 5%. In 1970, the percentage of
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agriculture
was
greatly
decreased from 35% to 18%. The
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proportion
of self employment and industries had
marginally
increased by 25%. In 1990, the
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proportion
of self employment at the highest with 37%. Service Sector had
greatly
decreased from 27% in 1970 to 7% in 1990. The percentage of
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agriculture
at the lowest with 10%.
Overall
, the
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agriculture
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proportion
was at the highest in 1950 and it had lowest in 1990.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950, 1970, 1990

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