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The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. xXoo
The following table illustrates four reasons why individuals opt to visit art events over the past 20 years in the United Kingdom. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the number of people who attend art events in order to escort their children and for work-related reasons is significantly increased, whereas individuals who were inclined to visit art events to see special occasions are dramatically decreased. To begin with, the number of people who visit such occasions with the purpose to see specific performers does not change over the two decades, 58% and 56% respectively. It is worth mentioning that the percentage of people who pay attention to art activity with intention to accompany children has substantially risen from 9% to 24% throughout the twenty-year period. Similarly, people who attend such occasions because of business-related reasons has increased from two decades ago(6%) and reached a peak at the present time(11%). In contrast, the percentage of people who visit art events with an eye on to see particular celebrations has fallen from 27% to 9%.
The following table illustrates four reasons why individuals opt to
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over the past 20 years in the United Kingdom.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the number of
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people
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who
attend
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art
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events
in order to escort their children and for work-related reasons is
significantly
increased, whereas individuals
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who
were inclined
to
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visit
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events
to
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see
special occasions are
dramatically
decreased.

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begin
with, the number of
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people
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who
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visit
such occasions with the purpose to
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see
specific performers does not
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change
over the two decades, 58% and 56%
respectively
. It is worth mentioning that the percentage of
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people
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who
pay attention to
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art
activity with intention to accompany children has
substantially
risen from 9% to 24% throughout the twenty-year period.
Similarly
,
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people
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who
attend such occasions
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because
of business-related reasons has increased from two decades ago(6%) and reached a peak at the present time(11%).
In contrast
, the percentage of
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people
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who
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visit
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art
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events
with an eye on to
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see
particular celebrations has fallen from 27% to 9%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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