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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different counties in 2001.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different counties in 2001. 0G09
The bar charts provide information about the percentages of spending time by each teacher in educating in the different types of schools in four countries in one year. Overall, upper secondary education and lower secondary school experienced a downward trends, while primary school showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both schools had some fluctuations. Although primary school’s teachers had a higher hours, it outraced the next two schools at the end of the period. By a teacher of upper secondary school for teaching was about 700 hours spent in Japan, being higher than the lower secondary school by approximately 50 hours. Then, it rosa to almost 200 hours in Spain. The lower secondary school fluctuated between 650 hours and 600 hours in Japan, Spain and Iceland countries. The figure showed continued to increase steadily to the end of the period, reaching about 11900 hours in the USA and the lower secondary school’s teacher was a gradual growth to about 1000 hours in teaching in the USA. Percentage of teaching of primary school’s teacher was less than 600 hours spent in Japan, when about one third of marriages in primary school ended as opposed to almost a half in lower secondary school. However, the figure experienced a steady fluctuation during between Spain and Iceland countries. It increased steady for the USA, outracing the teaching of each teacher of upper secondary school and lower secondary education.
The bar charts provide information about the percentages of spending time by each
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in educating in
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in four countries in one year.

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secondary
education and lower
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secondary
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experienced a downward trends, while
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primary
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showed
an upward trend throughout the period. Both
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schools
had
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some
fluctuations. Although
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primary
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school’s
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had a higher
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, it outraced the
next
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at the
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end
of the period.

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of upper
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secondary
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for
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was about 700
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spent in Japan, being higher than the lower
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secondary
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by approximately 50
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to almost 200
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in Spain. The lower
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secondary
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fluctuated between 650
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and 600
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in Japan, Spain and Iceland countries. The figure
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showed
continued to increase
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of the period, reaching about 11900
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in the USA and the lower
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was a gradual growth to about 1000
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in
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in the USA.

Percentage of
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of
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primary
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was less than 600
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spent in Japan, when about one third of marriages in
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primary
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ended as opposed to almost a half in lower
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secondary
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.
However
, the figure experienced a steady fluctuation during between Spain and Iceland countries. It increased steady for the USA, outracing the
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of each
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education.
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