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The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The main purpose of this table is to demonstrate information about the 20-year period research in which four main reasons for the attendance in art events by people. To begin with, famous artists were always the first on the list who attracted over 50 percent of visitors in all periods given. On the other hand, the special occasion was at 27% at the beginning of the period and it started to fall moderately to 20% 10 years later, and finally, it reached its lowest point at 9 percent, which was the smallest statistic in modern days. Although the accompanying children had only 9 and 15 percent in the beginning, it increased significantly by 24 percent over the 20 years. Interestingly, bottom of the list was the working issues, at 6, 10 and 11 percent in given periods. Overall, as can be seen from this table, desire to see specific performers remained the most popular factor until our days, whereas the celebration became the least popular among others over the same period. Similarly, accompanying children and business factors became more noticeable than it was 20 years before.

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