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The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East.

The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East. 2mBw
The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East. The line graph on the other hand demarcates the fluctuation of share price (in US Dollars) for the time period between 1996 to 2001. Taking pie chart into consideration it could be depicted that out of the total 17. 1 billion Coca Cola cans sold during the year 2000 the North America observed the maximum sale of around 30. 4%, whereas Africa and the Middle East recorded the sale of only 7%. In Latin America it was around 25. 7%. Meanwhile in Europe and Asia purchased 20. 5% and 16. 5% of total cans respectively. The line graph on the other hand shows that there was an escalation of share prices from around $25 in 1996 to $70 in 1997 which was followed by a modest decline in the end of that year. However in 1998 it rose sharply to $90 succeeded by a fall to $60. The share prices in 1999 again took a plunge to $40 and was followed by a slight rise in 2000
The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East. The line graph
on the other hand
demarcates the fluctuation of share price (in US Dollars) for the time period
between 1996 to 2001
.

Taking pie chart into consideration it could
be depicted
that out of the total 17. 1 billion Coca Cola cans sold during the year 2000 the North America observed the maximum sale of around 30. 4%, whereas Africa and the Middle East recorded the sale of
only
7%. In Latin America it was around 25. 7%.
Meanwhile
in Europe and Asia
purchased
20. 5% and 16. 5% of total cans
respectively
.

The line graph
on the other hand
shows
that there was an escalation of share prices from around $25 in 1996 to $70 in 1997 which
was followed
by a modest decline in the
end
of that year.
However
in 1998 it rose
sharply
to $90 succeeded by a fall to $60. The share prices in 1999 again took a plunge to $40 and
was followed
by a slight rise in 2000
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East.

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