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The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East.

The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East. 2mBw

The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East. The line graph on the other hand demarcates the fluctuation of share price (in US Dollars) for the time period between 1996 to 2001. Taking pie chart into consideration it could be depicted that out of the total 17. 1 billion Coca Cola cans sold during the year 2000 the North America observed the maximum sale of around 30. 4%, whereas Africa and the Middle East recorded the sale of only 7%. In Latin America it was around 25. 7%. Meanwhile in Europe and Asia purchased 20. 5% and 16. 5% of total cans respectively. The line graph on the other hand shows that there was an escalation of share prices from around $25 in 1996 to $70 in 1997 which was followed by a modest decline in the end of that year. However in 1998 it rose sharply to $90 succeeded by a fall to $60. The share prices in 1999 again took a plunge to $40 and was followed by a slight rise in 2000

The pie chart illustrates the sale of Coca Cola for the year 2000 in North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and the Middle East. The line graph on the other hand
 demarcates the fluctuation of share price (in US Dollars) for the time period Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1996 and 2001".between 1996 and 2001
between 1996 to 2001
.

Taking pie chart into consideration it could be depicted
 that out of the total 17. 1 billion Coca Cola cans sold during the year 2000 the North America observed the maximum sale of around 30. 4%, whereas Africa and the Middle East recorded the sale of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 7%. In Latin America it was around 25. 7%. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
Meanwhile
 in Europe and Asia This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 20. 5% and 16. 5% of total cans respectively
.

The line graph on the other hand
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that there was an escalation of share prices from around $25 in 1996 to $70 in 1997 which was followed
 by a modest decline in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of that year. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 in 1998 it rose sharply
 to $90 succeeded by a fall to $60. The share prices in 1999 again took a plunge to $40 and was followed
 by a slight rise in 2000