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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005.

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. kANR
The main purpose of the table is to provide information about the proportion of consuming four various fuel sorts to produce electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. As is presented in the table in general, each country's percentage of fuel preferences to generate electricity was different from each other. We can see that the fuel type of coal and lignite was chosen by Malasia and Singapore a significant percentage with 61% and 42%, respectively. Besides, Singapore also used other types of fuels with 39% remarkedly. Nuclear energy was mostly preferred by South Korea and Japan with 33% and 49%, sequentially. Moreover, South Korea also produced electricity by used Hydro and Wind energy with 48% primarily. Japan also made electricity by other fuel energy sources with 39%. On the other hand, it is perfectly clear to observe that Thailand consumed the fuel type of other energy sources firstly and petroleum products secondly to make electricity. While the percentage of petroleum products was 36%, the percentage of other energy sources was 42%.
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in five Asian countries in 2005.

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preferences to generate
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with 61% and 42%,
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On the
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005.

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