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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar graph shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. According to the graph it can be observed that USA is the most producing country among the rest and Canada is the least producing country. China has been the growing carbon emission drastically with these time period. Germany has hit the gradual slum and has degraded carbon emission in every year. India has also made a dramatic growth in the amount of carbon emission in every year. In 2005 India has seen growing alot than the previous years. USA has been the top country that emissions carbon. USA has the highest in 2005 that emissions carbon among the rest countries. In conclusion, it can be observed that USA is the highest country which has been discharging carbon the most every year among the rest. Germany has controlled the discharge of carbon with in these years. UK is the lowest country which emits carbon in the year 2005.
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the amount of
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carbon
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emissions
in
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different
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countries
during three
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years.

According to the graph it can
be observed
that USA is the most producing
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country
among the rest and Canada is the least producing
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country
. China has been the growing
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carbon
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emission
drastically
with these time period. Germany has hit the gradual slum and has degraded
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carbon
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emission
in every
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year
. India has
also
made a dramatic growth in the amount of
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carbon
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emission
in every
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year
. In 2005 India has
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seen
growing
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alot
than the previous years. USA has been the top
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country
that
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emissions
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carbon
. USA has the highest in 2005 that
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emissions
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carbon
among the rest countries.

In conclusion
, it can
be observed
that USA is the highest
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country
which has been discharging
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carbon
the
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most every
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year
among the rest. Germany has controlled the discharge of
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carbon
with in these years. UK is the lowest
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country
which emits
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carbon
in the
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year
2005.

IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.

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6.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.