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the table below shows the result of survey conducted on finding how secondary schools in three contries travel to schooll

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the table provides information on the percentage of students who use means of transport travel to school of 3 countries, namely Britain, Australia, Singapore. Overall, it can be seen that the number of students using cars goes to school is the highest among 3 vehicles countries, namely Britain and Australia while Singapore major use public transport to go shool. Looking at the details, the car is the most popular means of transport in Britain and Australia with 65% while the figure is the least in Singapore only with 10%. However, In Singapore, the number of students who go to school by public transport is the highest in 3 countries around 65% while in the UK and Australia use public transport only with 16% and 20% respectively. After the number of students goes to school on foot in Singapore which ranks at the top of the 3 countries. in general, students use cars to go to school that is still the most popular in 3 vehicles.
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in Britain and Australia with 65% while the figure is the least in Singapore
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