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he pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

he pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 0E5YQ
The supplied pie charts show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. By looking at the charts the waste products are removed by different methods (Recycling, Chemical treatment, Underground, Dumping at Sea and Incineration). Dumping the waste products is hazards method, where United Kingdom buries most of it's waste products underground 82%, whereas Sweden dumps more than half of it's waste products 55% and Republic of Korea dumps only 22% which is the least out of three countries. Recycling is the eco-friendly method and most useful idea too. Republic of Kore leads the most recycling out of all three countries 69% of it's waste products whereas Sweden 25%. Incineration which is burring of waste products this method leads to lot of pollution, Sweden burns 20% of waste products, Republic of Korea 9% and United Kingdom just 2%. United Kingdom is the only country to destroy the waste products by Chemical treatment and Dumping in the sea which is of 8 % for both methods and also it is the only country which doesn't follow any recycling methods. Out of all methods dumping of the waste products under the ground is used most in all the three countries.
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IELTS academic he pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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