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The table below shows the proportion of time different age groups spend on various internet activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of time different age groups spend on various internet activities. 5a8Kp
The table illustrates the percentage of time spent on various internet activities by various age group. The participants are sperated into six age groups from ten to fifty of over. Shopping, social networking, browsing news sites, browsing sports sites and playing games are all examples of Internet activities. Overall, it can be seen that most of older people that are over forty spend the majority of there time on news and sports. About younger people, they play more game and spend a lot of time on social networking. The data reveals that Internet usage differs substantially among persons of various ages. The youngest group(10-15) spends most of their time to play video games. Oldest group they like to browse news sites and sports sites. It can be seen that the youngest age(10-15) has the least time on shopping, browsing on news sites and sports sites. About the oldest group, they hardly spend time playing games like other age group. 16-20 group has much time on social networking.
The table illustrates the percentage of
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spent on various internet activities by various
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age
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. The participants are
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into six
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age
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from ten to fifty of over. Shopping, social networking, browsing
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news
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sites
, browsing
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sports
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sites
and playing
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games
are all examples of Internet activities.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that most of older
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people
that are over forty
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spend
the majority of there
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time
on
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news
and
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sports
. About younger
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people
, they play more game and
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a lot of
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on social networking.

The data reveals that Internet usage differs
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among persons of various
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ages
. The youngest
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group(10-15)
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spends
most of their
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to play video
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games
.
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Oldest
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they like to browse
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news
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and
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sports
sites.

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seen
that the youngest
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age(10-15)
has the least
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on shopping, browsing on
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news
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sites
and
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sports
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. About the oldest
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, they hardly
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playing
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like other
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. 16-20
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has much
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on social networking.

IELTS academic The table below shows the proportion of time different age groups spend on various internet activities.

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