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The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998. pAY2

The given table describes the total amount of money spent in comparison to their income. Graph shows the most common items that people bought in the UK in 1998. Graph contains 4 common type of items that people like to spent money on. That category includes food, electronic equipment, music and videos. Human statistics separated on adults and children, men and women, boys and girls. The most common item that people spent money if of course food. But women like to spent the most amount of money rather than other categories. They spent almost 39% of income! Boys spent less rather then the others, only 9%. But the most non interesting category is electronic equipment. Most of all, children like to spent money on buying toys and they spent about 23% of income. Adults and girls don't like to spent so much and spent only 5% of income. Music is very popular for growing up people. Children spent about 40% of their money for music! But, if statistic is correct, girls spent more on music. Videos is not much popular in women category, so women spent only 0. 5% of their income. But children like films, so they like to spent about 12% of their money. Summing up, proportions for money spent on this common items is not equal. The more person adult become, the more he becomes interested in housekeeping and food making. But young people are interested in attractions and fun and because of it, they spent most of their money on music and videos.

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