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The picture below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The picture below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now. NR0W
The sets of map depicts the layout of a park in 1980, and also show the changes that has been done in the present time. Overall, it can be seen from the map that there has been noticeable changes taken for recent park but there are few similarities in the two layouts. In 1980, all four sides of a park was surrounded by walls and there were two gates to enter inside the park. One was on the west side and another one was on the south side. The part of garden was in ‘L’ shape which connects the both gates. On the east side of the path, towards the south-west and south-east were flower bed, With beautiful flowers. The benches was placed between west wall and road which surrounds three sides of small pond. In the north east of Park, the area was covered by trees. In present, a lot of changes can be seen in the park. The road is now extended from north to south with sub-branch towards eas, and wall has been removed totally. Some picnic chairs has been placed on the north-east corner where people can enjoy the brand barbecues. The playground is replaced on the place of flowers in south-east side, and the flowers area in south-west has been replaced with bushes. Ponds and benches remain at same place in present layout.
The sets of map
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depicts
the layout of a
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park
in 1980, and
also
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show
the
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changes
that has
been done
in the present time.
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, it can be
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seen
from the map that there has been noticeable
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changes
taken for recent
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park
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but
there are few similarities in the two layouts. In 1980, all four
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sides
of a
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park
was surrounded
by walls and there were two gates to enter inside the
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park
. One was on the west side and another one was on the south side. The part of garden was in ‘L’ shape which connects the both gates. On the east side of the path, towards the south-west and south-east were
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flower
bed, With
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beautiful
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flowers
. The benches
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was
placed between west wall and road which surrounds three
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sides
of
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small
pond. In the
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north east
of
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Park
, the area
was covered
by trees. In present,
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a lot of
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changes
can be
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seen
in the
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park
. The road is
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now
extended from north to south with sub-branch
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towards eas
, and wall has
been removed
totally
.
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Some
picnic chairs has
been placed
on the north-east corner where
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people
can enjoy the brand barbecues. The playground
is replaced
on the place of
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flowers
in south-east side, and the
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flowers
area in south-west has
been replaced
with bushes. Ponds and benches remain at same place in present layout.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the changes of a park from 1980 to now.

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