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The bar chart below shows the US seafood imports for 1986, 1996, and 2016, and the forecast for 2026. The pie charts show the graphical structure of these imports in 2016.

The bar chart below shows the US seafood imports for 1986, 1996, and 2016, and the forecast for 2026. The pie charts show the graphical structure of these imports in 2016. 7oo3
the graphs provide information on the volume of seafood imports in the United States between the years 1986 and 2016 with a prediction for 2026 and illustrate from which countries the seafood was imported in 2016. Overall, seafood imports tripled over that twenty-year period, with the top three countries controlling more than two-thirds of the market in the United States. In the future, however, import levels are forecast to be shrink. The US seafood imports increased from about $6 billion in 9186 to over $10 billion in 1996. Over the following ten years, that amount doubled and crossed the $20 billion mark in 2016. Despite the past growth, it is predicted that the trend will change and in 2026 the United States will recieve approxiamately $2 billion fewer seafood products from abroad than it did in 2016. In regard of the geographical split of imports, the three countries that dominated the market in 2016 were China, Thailand, and Canada, which respetively imported 28 per cent, 23 per cent, and 16 per cent of the seafood. The imports from other countries --including Indonesia, Vietnam, and Ecuador -- constituted one-third of the total annual seafood imports.
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in the United States between the years 1986 and 2016 with a prediction for 2026 and illustrate from which
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the seafood
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tripled over that twenty-year period, with the top three
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controlling more than two-thirds of the market in the United States. In the future,
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levels are forecast to be
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The US seafood
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increased from about $6
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in 9186 to over $10
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in 1996. Over the following ten years, that amount doubled and crossed the $20
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mark in 2016. Despite the past growth, it
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fewer seafood products from abroad than it did in 2016.

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, the three
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that dominated the market in 2016 were China, Thailand, and Canada, which
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imported 28 per cent, 23 per cent, and 16 per cent of the seafood. The
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from other
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--including Indonesia, Vietnam, and Ecuador -- constituted one-third of the total annual seafood
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the US seafood imports for 1986, 1996, and 2016, and the forecast for 2026. The pie charts show the graphical structure of these imports in 2016.

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