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The graphs shows the average number of UK commuters travels cach day by Bus, Train and Car between 1978 and 2030.

The graphs shows the average number of UK commuters travels cach day by Bus, Train and Car between 1978 and 2030. kDmR
The graph illustrates the average number of travlers who commute every day by three different transportation ways in UK from 1970 to 2030. Overall, the most striking feature of the graph is that the people from Britain prefer to travel by Car and Train which has raising number of users throughout the period whereas, the use of Bus declined the travelers in the slot of 68 years. A glance at the graph, in 1970, the UK commuters preferred car were about 5 millions which had remained in the next 1e years. After that, huge raise in the number of commuters can be observed (7 millions) between 198e and 2000 that had been stable in the numbers till 2010. Additionally, the car users have been increased from 7 millions to B millions and 9 millions in the year 2020 and 2030 respectively. Considering the other factores, Bus travelers have been declined throughout the period which was arounf 4 millions in 1970 and less than 3 millions in 2030. Moreover, number of people optedd for Train were 2 millions approximately which has gradually increase till 2000(3 millions) that has been remained constant in the next 18e years. Sudden raise in the commuters (5 millions) can be observed from 2018 to 2030.
The graph illustrates the average
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travlers
who commute every day by three
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different
transportation ways in UK from 1970 to 2030.

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, the most striking feature of the graph is that the
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people
from Britain prefer to travel by Car and Train which has raising
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number
of users throughout the period whereas, the
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use
of Bus declined the travelers in the slot of 68 years.

A glance at the graph, in 1970, the UK commuters preferred car were about 5
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millions
which had remained in the
next
1e years. After that, huge raise in the
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number
of commuters can
be observed
(7
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millions)
between 198e and 2000 that had been stable in the
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numbers
till 2010.
Additionally
, the car users have
been increased
from 7
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millions
to B
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millions
and 9
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millions
in the year 2020 and 2030
respectively
.

Considering the other
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factores
, Bus travelers have
been declined
throughout the period which was
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arounf
4
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millions
in 1970 and less than 3
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millions
in 2030.
Moreover
,
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people
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optedd
for Train were 2
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millions
approximately which

has
gradually
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increase
till 2000(3
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that has
been remained
constant in the
next
18e years. Sudden raise in the commuters (5
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can
be observed
from 2018 to 2030.
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